There's not much to judge when it comes to animation because there's barely any... lip sync is ok, I guess.
The thing you have to work on is your audio. Try to talk from little more far away or use popfilter to avoid blowing on the mic.
Also try to put a little more effort into your animations to make them longer and more entertaining. For now only 2 stars from me for not being utter shit.
Thanks for the tips! :)
Very well made animation, but you could add some english subtitles, because most of NG users don't understand german language.
Very short, but I like the smooth animation and good match with the music :)
Fighting scene looked so badass! :)
Animations has it's flaws though, eg. bad audio. At the beginning I wasn't sure if that's breathing or some really weird snakes.
Yeah, sound work is really new for me here. I definitely agree. Will do some work!
Really well made fights + interesting story. You could work a bit on some kind of audio eg. music, but overall I like it.
Thanks Kanahani, I'm going to make sure that part 2 will do have background music and high quality audio..
This one looks really good! I like how fluid and complex the movement is. Art style + colors + shadows are also the things that made me like it :)
I'm giving it only 3 stars though due to only 3 seconds and lack of sound.
cheers! it was just a lil practice, and im terrible at sound design, so i thought id just let the animation take the stage
Could have added english subtitles at least - I give it 1 star because art style looks ok.
Hi,thanks for your vote.
There is a new version with subs in English. ;)
Looks really good! Too bad it's so short, I'd love to see more.
I think it should be submitted in "Audio" section instead.
thank you but i don't think so
Animation looks ok, but what's up with that black screen for the first few seconds?
so I did put in an entry but when I put it in it erased the file so that's why its like that
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